Read your content out loud. Do you sound like a friendly person or a robot?
Let’s Skip the Formalities
Read your content out loud. Do you sound like a friendly person or a robot?
We received a $30,000 grant from the Baker Foundation.
ReadingWorks just started a tutoring program at Eastside High School.
These are okay on one level, but don’t answer the question – How are you making a difference for the people you serve?
Why is this important?
Why is it important that Eastside High School now has a tutoring program? Maybe it’s because 70% of their students are two grade levels behind in reading and your program can help boost their skills.
Of course, publicly acknowledging your major funders is important, but what will that grant be used for? How will it help people?
Speak your donor’s language
Then they wrote about developing treatments “of precisely targeted radiation to locate and destroy small, early stage lung tumors. That means less pain, fewer side effects, and faster recovery time for patients.”
Okay, there’s some passive voice in there, but it’s fairly easy to understand. The organization could have gotten overly technical. I think they gave a good example of how this treatment helps their patients battle this dreaded disease.
You need good stories
A great way to show your donors how you are making a difference is to tell a story, and the best stories are about the people you serve. I know they are harder to get, but this is what your donors want to hear.
When you tell a story, introduce a protagonist – an individual or family- and give them a name. You can change their names to protect their privacy.
Your story will continue with a challenge and end with how your donors helped make you make a difference. How to Simplify Your Nonprofit’s Story to One Paragraph
Show your donors how they are helping you make a difference
If you are communicating with current donors, don’t forget to thank them and let them know that they are a key to your success. After all, you wouldn’t be able to make a difference for the people you serve without their support.
How is your organization making a difference?
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Many of you may take on spring cleaning projects in your home. Here are a few spring cleaning projects you can do that will benefit your nonprofit organization.
Update and improve your donor database
Your donor database is an important tool and you need it to be up-to-date and filled with accurate information about your donors.
Be ready for your next mailing
Even though it’s tedious, have someone who is familiar with your donors (your development director?) go through your mailing lists and database to see if you need to make any additions, changes, and deletions.
This is crucial if you are planning a spring appeal or event.
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